“Always try to use the language so as to make quite clear
what you mean, and make sure your sentence couldn’t mean anything else.”
“Always prefer the plain direct word to the long, vague
one. Don’t say implement promises, but keep them.”
Never use abstract nouns when concrete ones will do. If
you mean ‘more people died,’ don’t say ‘mortality rose.’
“Don’t use adjectives which merely tell us how you want us
to feel about the thing you are describing.” Under this heading, Lewis goes on
to say that the writing should delight readers, not just label an event
delightful; or it should make them feel terror, not just to learn that an event
was terrifying. He says that emotional labeling is really just a way of asking
readers, ‘Please, will you do my job for me?’
“Don’t use words that are too big for the subject.” Lewis
illustrates this point by saying if you use infinitely as an intensifier
instead of the simple word very, you won’t have any word left when you need to
describe something that is truly infinite.
CS Lewis